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The Death of Dawn
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The Death of Dawn |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
It's that time again!!! seeps through the brain, with a taste of insane. the dawn falls quickly down to the earth the moon is smiling, yet the fading sun is frowning. Quickly through the hallways, spreads like a disease, learning is a fruitful spurt, which no way can be pleased. We are descending into the depths with only peace in mind. At our final breath we earn our wings, to travel through the beyond. Fascination with deaths door, find the quickest reason to explore. When i was born my demise started, the sun has now died, it signifies the end. the end of what was to be the end of what was to be everything consumed in one black void swalling our pride, we deserve to lose the dawn. "'I am the the lizard king I can do anything I can make the earth stop in its tracks I made the blue cars go away |
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Wet Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 60Brentwood, Tn |
Good Job!! I really appreciate this poetry in meanings I can not express in words. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Anomaly you have disappeared from the depths of teen emotion completely. Where have you been, what have you been up too? I have been faced with this utter lonliness of styles. Nobody writes like you, you have to post here or i'll wither hehe. I loved this poem, good job.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
VERY intriguing..hmmm...I can't say i understand every minute detail in it...but I love poems like this..I remember one of your other ones which was brilliant aswell...keep posting..  "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Holy moly this was awesome. I love the way you say things. It makes my mind work! Not always a good thing, but hey...what can ya do.. ~Carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey guys thank you for all the great replies...and dope teen emotion has escaped me totally..man it's pretty late now so i am going to go put on the Doors and sit in the dark for a while..only time i get to relax man...seeya guys "'I am the the lizard king I can do anything I can make the earth stop in its tracks I made the blue cars go away |
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