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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-09-16 08:29 PM


I thought I found someone,
who cared for me, who wanted to help me.
I thought you were my new beginning, my fresh start.
I wanted you to be so much more for me; expected a different world.

You and I are different.
You've never understood me, unfortunatly I always knew.
I tried to ignore the obvious, keep it all going strong.
I need someone to assist me through when this all goes wrong.

I thought I had someone who was there for me,
a shoulder to cry on, a person who understands,
one to believe in me, and back me up no matter what.
I realize now, this was all untrue; what I thought I'd found... I never have.

* this is about a friendship faltering... maybe it was always like this... I don't know why I've grown so attached. For once this is not about a man.   Odd... huh? I know I've kinda formed a trend!
Jenn

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luvnkris
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1 posted 2000-09-17 12:06 PM


hiya,
this is a gr8 poem, but pretty sad.
I hope one day you'll fine someone who you can really understand you!
i'm very lucky.. my bf is my best friend, who understands everything, he's the best!  

luv ya
Jo
xoxox


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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2 posted 2000-09-17 02:14 AM


Jenn~~~I dont find it odd that this isnt about a guy...Its really good to hear that this isnt about love (even though I am guilty of that)...Anyways friends come and go but some stay forever...You just need to move on and realize it was good while it lasted...Keep up the good work!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Jenn Cirrincione
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3 posted 2000-09-17 08:34 AM


Thanks everyone!

Luvnkris- this really isn't about any man or Boyfriend, it really has to do with a friend who is supposed to be my best friend and I don't even know where we stand anymore.   But, I'm glad you've found somebody like that to be with you...Thanks for your kind words.

Erin- Yes, friends do come and go, but that just happens so often for me. Perhaps I am just not the best judge of character. Oh well. Thank you again for your reply.


"He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright

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