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FitchGirl1896
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0 posted 2000-09-15 07:47 PM


Stars are meant to be wished on
and I thank my lucky star each night
for giving me the wish I wished for
the wish that makes heaven so bright
Dreams are meant to be remembered
and every night to be dreamt so true
That is why I cherish my dreams
because each night I dream of you
Promises are meant to be kept
and never to be broken
All the promises I've ever made
have been revealed each time we've spoken
Love is meant to be felt
From the heart so deep and true
That’s exactly how I feel
each time we say "I love you"
My stars granted me the wish
of dreams every night about you
All the promises I've ever made
were to always love you.





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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2000-09-16 02:39 AM


This was very sweet. I liked the poem. Keep it up!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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2 posted 2000-09-16 11:20 PM


This is a wonderful piece!! I love this love poem! Keep up the great work.

[This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 09-16-2000).]

Erin
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3 posted 2000-09-17 01:02 AM


WOW!!!This is wonderful!!!So beautiful...Such sweet words...Cant wait to see more!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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