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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2000-09-15 08:24 AM

They say she died of a broken heart,
from being ripped and torn apart.
But the reason she died had to do with you,
all the pain you caused, what did you do?
They say there was no one, to stop her,
she was alone, with no signifacant other.
But only you and I know the truth,
of why she was robbed of her eternal youth.
They say that that no one is to blame,
but everyone disagrees, no one feels the same.
Until you tell what little you know,
no one will let this go.
And unless you want to go on liveing in fright,
I suggest you tell what happened that night.
The air was cool, the trees were bare,
you brushed the leaves out of her hair.
And you told her you were going away,
and maybe you'd come back again some day./
You didn't know what you were destroying,
your life in that town had become boring.
But you didn't mean for her to die,
and no one can seem to figure out why.
She jumped from the barn that cold summer day,
and she seemed to float, just drift away.

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Hey everybody!! Guess what?? I am sick (cough, strep) Lalalalalalalalalal Forks rule!!!!!! Bye bye, allysa

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-09-15 12:32 PM

Allysa~~~Is this your own work???Cause I could swear that I read a poem almost exactly like this in a book...But I dont know...I like it though...Keep it up...

P.S.~~~Dont feel bad Im sick too, somewhat...In a lot of pain!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

2 posted 2000-09-15 12:37 PM

I loved it!! I have to say it does sound familiar, but who knows, I'm just a retard!! hehe

Anyways, you're sick too 'eh? it sucks big! Anyways, I liked this one a lot! Keep it up.
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

:) If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. :)

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2000-09-15 03:33 PM

Thanks for replying. This is my own work. I hate plagurizum. This girl in my class supposasly wrote this poem that made her the so called best writer in our grade, but then she admitted to getting it off of the internet and now the best writer spot is taken over by me!!! I don't plagurize, I swear. This is all my own. Just sat down at the comp., like I always do and began to type. Allysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

4 posted 2000-09-15 04:36 PM

Hey there

This is the first poem of yours I've read and I like it a LOT. It's very emotional with a lot of depth. Great job...keep writing. Glad to know its original work too...plagerism...YUCK! lol
Much Love
Kris
PS - I must say, I love your signature. I think you'll like mine too

lol You have good taste in music

~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe.~

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

5 posted 2000-09-15 04:39 PM

PS again - forks???

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

6 posted 2000-09-15 06:10 PM

Allysa~~~I asked you if this was your own work and you replied:

This is my own work. I hate plagurizum. This girl in my class supposasly wrote this poem that made her the so called best writer in our grade, but then she admitted to getting it off of the internet and now the best writer spot is taken over by me!!!

So what does that mean???You got it off the internet too??

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2000-09-16 02:36 AM

No, it means that this girl in her class plagurized and was the so called "best writer"....but since she commited her stupid act she was bumped off her false fantasia of praise by, yours truly, Allysa! Allysa is now best writer because she does NOT plagurize.

Anyway Forks rule, but...hey....soon enuff the power of the spoon shall reign.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

8 posted 2000-09-18 08:24 AM

Erin: No I do not plagurize. That's wrong and I hope no one ever does. When I write down poems by ohter people in my JOURNAL, I also put down their name and give them credit for writing it.

Kandi: You have good choice in music too!!! I'm gonna see them in concert!!!! 15th row!!! Awesome. Forks have such stuff to do with Dopey and me. He asked me to write a poem about a fork. ANd I did. It's called Twist.

Dopey:Thanks for sticking up for me!!! I love you man!!! Forks rule!!! Spoons will never regain power!!! (lol)

thanks all,
Allysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2000-10-18 08:11 PM

Erin --- stop pestering the girl

Allysa --- i hope this poem is not based on real events cause this is so tragic. You were able to described your feelings so well in this poem. I don't doubt that you are the best writer in your class...keep it up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

10 posted 2000-10-19 03:21 PM

This is a good poem, but as acire said, I hope it is not based on real events. Anyway, nice job writing this one

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

11 posted 2000-10-23 08:24 AM

thanks for replying. and no it;s not based on real events, the only poems that ever are are the love poems because my love life sucks!!!

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

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