How can we say life is fair?

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UNC STAR
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA

0 posted 2000-09-09 08:42 PM

How can we say
that life is fair
things happen to people we would
not dare and they get away with it
it is such a scare and people really
think that life is fair.
but to me life is not fair babies die,
people starve and that should be very rare
and all the food and money we use for useless
things let's give to the poor and see the joy
it brings. Mothers, Fathers, who ever it may be
keep them alive don't kill your dreams(babies)
they are lives that my invent or create something
we need so yourselves out and keep your babies.

STAR

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

1 posted 2000-09-09 11:27 PM

well life really isn't fair..society idolizes the rich and feeds them more money..the richer get richer as the poorer get poorer...i like the overall message of the poem.great work

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

2 posted 2000-09-09 11:27 PM

well life really isn't fair..society idolizes the rich and feeds them more money..the richer get richer as the poorer get poorer...i like the overall message of the poem.great work

Now night arrives with her purple legions
Retire now to your tents & to your dreams
Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth
I want to be ready. - JM

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

3 posted 2000-09-11 06:44 PM

I like! Life isn't fair! But hey, we might as well make the best of what we have! Keep writing! they're great!!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

p.s. do you go to UNC?just curious cuz I live about 45 minutes from there

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Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-09-11 06:55 PM

Does this have to do with abortion???Im just wondering cuz Im not sure about the part where you put: (babies)...It was very good though...Life will never be fair...We just have to make the most of what we have...Keep up the good work!!!

~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~

UNC STAR
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA

5 posted 2000-09-12 10:38 PM

Thank you all for the replies I really feel welcomed.

What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

6 posted 2000-09-13 08:22 AM

I like this much. Life's not fair. Never has been, I know. Anyways, don't listen to me, as I "don't know anything about life" puzziling, how the same person said "you are so perfect. you know about everything" the day before. Oh well, looking forward to reading more from you/ Love ya, Allysa

Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see.

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