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sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-09-05 11:01 AM

I keep telling myself
Day after day
That tomorrow will be easier
Than yesterday

Soon, tomorrow will come
And a new day will dawn
All memories of you will disappear
And I will be at peace

The future looks bright
With just a tinge of shadow
Shadows will fade
As I learn to forget you

But...
I always seem to remember
And I can't forget...
You won't let me

It's all a lie
Eery day will be the same
Tomorrow will come,
And I will still remember you

Jay: This poem I wrote, is not about me...ok? Remember..I'm good at putting myself in other's situations!

~*~SCG~*~

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2000-09-05 11:26 AM

Nicely done....

regards,
sudhir

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

2 posted 2000-09-05 11:43 AM

thanks Sudhir

~*~SCG~*~

"Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Author Unknown

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-05 11:51 AM

SCG~~~Im not sure which one I like better!!!They were both really good...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

4 posted 2000-09-05 11:57 AM

Thanks ERIN!

~*~SCG~*~

"Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Author Unknown

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

5 posted 2000-09-05 12:04 PM

Very nice poem. Heh, I feel that way about meh Ex, heh, oh well.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

6 posted 2000-09-05 12:25 PM

Thanks Dragon...I appreciate your reply!

~*~SCG~*~

"Poetry is what makes the invisible appear"-Author Unknown

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

7 posted 2000-09-05 03:43 PM

Wow... from reading this, I thought that this poem was about you personally! I have been in this situation before, and you describe it well. Keep up the good work!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

8 posted 2000-09-06 11:24 AM

Thanks Lovebug..for your reply! It means much!

~*~SCG~*~

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

9 posted 2000-09-06 02:53 PM

SCG*~
This poem is SO good

i love it! it has a lot of feeling in it

keep uo the great writing and check out my stuff sometime!
luv
~*Pixie*~

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

10 posted 2000-09-06 06:40 PM

Pixie...It's a deal!

thanks all for your replies! They mean much!

~*~SCG~*~

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