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sherm
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since 2000-07-21
Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-09-03 11:10 AM


i love you so much
you make everything fun
bring me so much happiness           chorus
and make me feel like someone

your long curly brown hair
and those big bluish green eyes
the sweet curves of your smile
and my heart just flies

it flutters with each look
as i gaze at how great you are
your my everything
my north star

chorus


Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not

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Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
1 posted 2000-09-03 11:28 AM


this was beautiful
this must be about someone really special
great work



Love Ya Bunches
~Jen~

           


The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

LoveBug
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2 posted 2000-09-03 01:58 PM


I'm so glad that you have someone that makes you feel this way. You express it well. Keep up the great work!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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