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AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

0 posted 2000-09-03 04:29 AM


First of all I have to thank Alex once again for being the inspiration towards this poem...I really don't know what I would do without him being there to laugh at (not with) and for giving me all these ideas.
(Nah babe, you're my favorite, you know that!!)

I sit here and listen,
To the garble you have to say,
Nothing really makes much sense,
But I figure what the hey.
You think everything’s a joke,
And most of it really is,
You tell me you’re off your rocker,
I’m surprised you realize this.
Your favorite words are lalala,
Singing to the tune in you head,
A drunk insomniac you are,
You really should be in bed.
Where do you think you are right now?
Who do you think you are?
Could you be a rally car driver,
Or maybe a movie star.
You’re really off your rocker now,
Far much worse than before,
But I don’t really give a damn,
If you decide to drink more.
I can’t stop the laughter now,
You may be asking why,
The real reason for my hysterics is,
I’m talking with a drunk guy.


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
~Beautiful~
~Creed~

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Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
1 posted 2000-09-03 04:37 AM


Hey babe,
I’m not drunk!  All the time…at least…
As for being off my rocker, well, that’s true (:  Anywho, lalablahnaba.  I’m still working on your poem babe!

Shallalabanaba,



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“Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I

Lone Insomniac
Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45

2 posted 2000-09-03 06:24 AM


hey
nice poem !!! I liked the line about the insomniac ;O)
hehehe
no, really it's a great poem, maybe it's about me ...
:P
keep up the great work !!
see yaa
robin

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
3 posted 2000-09-03 03:21 PM


Well, in my many encounters with drunk people (including myself occasionally) I haven't heard too many of them admit they were "off their rocker" (by the way that's cute!) just watch them do superman jumps on cars and stuff...oh wait, I do the superman jumps. Anyways....(LoL) Deranger is one crazy guy I have come to find. Hope you all have some more fun!!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

p.s. the title was what got me!! hehehe


~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

4 posted 2000-09-03 03:26 PM


Oooooh look! We have the same signature!  You like CREED?  Well anyway, great poem, especially the title.  Keep writing
Bel


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

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