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sherm
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since 2000-07-21
Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-09-03 02:00 AM


its been a long time since iv posted   school sucks and keeps me really busy    this one is just about feeling lost with what will happen after high school


confused
distraut
where am i going
where do i choose to rot
someone help me
please
i cant see
i dont know
im scared
and i hate that
theres no flow
no path at all
i feel like a rat
in one of those mazes
where should i go
its all a wall
i have no idea
im clueless
theres no 3D
its all just flat
when does life not suck
im scared
and i hate that


Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not

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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-09-03 09:16 AM


Nice to see you again Sherm! Wow ... you've packed a lot of strong emotions into this poem. I remember feeling this same way so many years ago. I had absolutely no clue what I was going to do after high school. It's now 20 years later and I own my own company in the oil and gas industry ... go figure!

Just keep your eye out for opportunities and things you enjoy ... it will come eventually, have faith that you will find some answers in their time.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Jenabou
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
2 posted 2000-09-03 10:25 AM


wow
this was really powerfull
i loved it
great work


Love Ya Bunches
~Jen~

      


The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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