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this is the poem no. 100 I wrote...YAY !
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this is the poem no. 100 I wrote...YAY ! |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
this is my poem no. 100...It's stupid I have so much poems but I just found this site 2 months ago...becuz this is special to me: I want to dedicate this song to some one who will always be in my heart, be with me.... I care... I love you annemiek... Hypocrite Today I closed a chapter of my life It took so long I cried every night To take a decision I could never make But I had to shake myself awake I don’t have the slightest idea what I’ve done I have no words I say it by this song I never wanted to hurt you this way I don’t wanna lose you but I have to pay You can call me a hypocrite if I say I love you a hypocrite if I say I love you a hypocrite if I say I love you but I do.... I don’t know why I took this way I guess I wanted to live day by day I want you to take these words And keep reading them when it hurts Inside I’m torn to pieces I feel like I’m fallen for treasen I can’t live without your smile Take your hands and fall in denial You can call me a hypocrite if I say I love you a hypocrite if I say I love you a hypocrite if I say I love you but I do.... I just want to know one thing... Life, why are you so unfair to me ? Life, why are you so unfair to me ? LIFE WHY ARE YOU SO UNFAIR TO ME ?! I LOVE YOU !!! I LOVE YOU !!! CAN’T YOU SEE LIFE YOU’RE SO UNFAIR LIFE YOU’RE SO UNFAIR LIFE YOU’RE SO UNFAIR but I care.... |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Very good poem/song. You put life into words. And congrats on your 100th poem...I don't think I've written that many. Within you I lose myself. Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again. -unkown- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Congrats on #100!!!Keep up the good work... LIFE WHY ARE YOU SO UNFAIR TO ME ?! That is the best part...I feel as if life is unfair to me for different reasons...Keep posting those poems you have...I know you have alot more if this was the 100th one you wrote!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow....nicely writ and congrats on the 100! Salma |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
ME likes songs by nice Lone Insomniac. Me’s a insomniac toos, lala rockyrues --- Spreading insanity, one post at a time “Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I |
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