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Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-09-02 03:27 PM

That day you asked me out that there were tears in my eyes
I was so happy
That my heart filled up with wonderful sighs
You would start to make me laugh more
I was smiling everyday
I could tell you really liked me
With everyword you'd say
So I decided to open up
To let you come in
Then you told me you loved me and the doors to my heart quickly unlocked
For so long I'd had them blocked
Then a few days later you said I was getting too serious
And right then I knew what you were going to do
I was gettting to serious?
You're the one that said I love you
I should have never let you come in
Now I wonder if that was a sin
You made me open up
Just so you could leave another cut

*this poem is unfinished*

Within you I lose myself.
Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again.
-unkown-

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-09-02 03:32 PM

This poem is so sad. I loved it. I think the poem is great the way it is, but if you add some more to it, id like to see the end results......bye!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Lone Insomniac
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 45

2 posted 2000-09-02 03:33 PM

hey !!!

DAMN I liked this poem !!! it's so amazing !!
I think a lot of people (including me) had such an experience...and if the poem is unfinished I can't wait to read the rest !!!
it really tells what U feel, and what i felt at that moment...thanks for sharing it !!!
maybe a lot of people won't feel alone anymore after they read this...
keep up the fantastic work !!

greetz Robinn

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-02 04:48 PM

Nikki~~~This is a good poem...I like it...You need to let me know when you finish it...I cant wait to see it!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-09-02 05:11 PM

I'm with 'dopey' in thinking this poem is wonderful as is. I know this situation all too well. Here, I'm giving you a virtual hug.

*~Meredith~*

I'll just keep on laughing,
iding the tears in my eyes...
*Oleander

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

5 posted 2000-09-02 10:52 PM

oh dear, I know the situation all too well! I'm sorry that you have had to endure this pain. It's no fun. I have been on both ends of the situation...they both suck I hope that you are ok and if u ever need to talk you can e-mail me. I'm a great listener and I do my best at giving advice. I can't wait to see the rest of this!! Best of luck my friend! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~

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