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luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-01 10:50 AM


*>Kristian<*

I care about you so much
All I want is for you to be glad
Knowing that you're in despair
Is making me feel sad

I feel so very helpless
Because I don't know what to say
And all I want to do for you
Is help you find your way

I don't know what you're going through
I can't begin to imagine either
But all you need to know from me
Is that I'm here for you now and forever

Please when you are feeling low
Know I care so much
And everytime you're feeling lonely
Please think of my touch

I know this probably means so little
But I'm trying to express
That Kristian all I want from life
Is for it to be you and I for the rest
< !signature-->

* When I met you
I liked you
When I liked you
I kissed you
When I kissed you
I loved you
Please now I love you
Don't let me lose you *



[This message has been edited by luvnkris (edited 09-01-2000).]

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DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-09-01 10:59 AM


That's a very nice poem, I'm sure he appreciates it a lot. (I know I would)

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-09-01 01:43 PM


This is really good...I hope that he liked it!!!(Did you give it to him?)

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


luvnkris
Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia
3 posted 2000-09-05 09:19 AM


yeh i did give it to him!
and he said it meant a lot to him!  

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