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jytree
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since 2000-01-26
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0 posted 2000-08-25 01:27 PM


Into the light we all reach for something we cannot find,
Yet in reality in is starring us in the face yet we are blinded by our on ambusing the we cannot see what we really need in life,
Stick to the simple things in life,
We need for a place to live a car to drive,
We need a mom and dad who love us so,
Love us unconditional yet some don't know
We each have trials we have to face,
But faceing them and winning puts you in first place,
The isn't a race but more like a clock on our lives,
winding down everyday,
One need the makes me whole,
It is just the thought that their is someone that I can hold,
Hold in time of fear,
Hold her so so near,
For the fear is that I might lose her one day and then what am I stuck with,
Nothing I just sit twiddle my thumbs and die alittle each day,
But her love brings me into the light makes me feel so alive and free,
Some people have a hard time of not noticeing what theyu have in their arms Who cares if it not who you want you them stop camplaining please people don't realise how lucky they are when they can have any girl or guy it gets me depressed yet My angel ing the light keeps me happy and pure thank you for the light


For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-08-25 06:43 PM


this is such a sweet poem!!!i really liked it...keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-08-25 07:00 PM


Wow. This is fantastic! Very, VERY good job. Hope to read more soon! Peace out.

*~Meredith~*



Somebody stop the world,
I want to get off!
*me

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
3 posted 2000-08-26 06:57 PM


wow! such a sweet and heartfelt poem, keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

4 posted 2000-08-26 08:02 PM


This is really nice and really sweet. I always thought that's what love should be like. Good luck...

Salma

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
5 posted 2000-08-26 08:21 PM


Awsome poem I reallu liked it keep up the awsome work!
  Lauren

Alwye
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In the space between moments
6 posted 2000-08-27 12:24 PM


Very beautiful and heartfelt.  Well done!  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

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