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young-poet
New Member

since 2000-08-22

Posts 6

0 posted 2000-08-23 10:30 PM

This is one of my first poems and it describes how I feel about my girlfriend. So please tell me what you think.
Thanx

I think of you and
my heart gains speed.
I want to fulfill
your every need.

It must have been
love at first sight.
Because the moment I saw you
my heart took flight.

I look at you and wonder why
you waste your time with me.
Then I think there must
be something I don't see.

You say you love me
and I know it's true.
But I'm still afraid
to say "I love you".

I've loved before
and then got hurt.
So with you
I'm on full alert.

It's been a while
but now it's true.
Ican honestly say
"I LOVE YOU"

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

1 posted 2000-08-23 11:30 PM

Hey my man I feel your poem its great keep up the good work and don't be afraid to say I LOVE YOU to your girl if not you then who?....

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

2 posted 2000-08-23 11:47 PM

Hey!

I know exactly how you feel. It's so hard to love again after you've been hurt. And you feel like you never want to love again. Then someone special comes in your life and you question yourself. praise the lord for these people because love is a beautiful thing when its said responsibly

Keep up the great work

~!*DQ*!~

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-08-24 12:09 PM

i love it young~poet!!!its really good...2 thumbs up for you...i think we all went throught the stage of being loved then getting hurt...and theres nothing we can do except NOT fall in love...which would be really hard...but anyways keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2000-08-24 12:11 PM

Well let me just say that this poem was very beautiful and loving...your girlfriend is a lucky girl.

Angel< !signature-->

Don't mess with the bull, young man. You'll get the horns.

~*Guardian of Light*~

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 08-24-2000).]

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

5 posted 2000-08-24 05:21 PM

wounderful poem and I think you did a great job. keep up the great job. I also hope things work out. Lovely_Kris

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2000-08-24 10:19 PM

You've put this situation into words so well, great poem!

ShUgArHiGh
Junior Member

since 2000-08-24

Posts 24

7 posted 2000-08-24 10:24 PM

I thought your poem described your feelings perfectly. Dont be afraid to show that you love someone...love like your heart never got broken because if she is truely the one and u dont open yourself up...ur missing out on so much!! Great poem i hope to hear more from u!!

young-poet
New Member

since 2000-08-22

Posts 6

8 posted 2000-08-24 10:40 PM

Thanks for the replys guys and try andkeep writing good poetry

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