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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-08-21 12:55 PM


So much pain in my past
And yet, I still go on
Knowing I'll be hurt again
There's only one way to end the pain
But I just can't bring myself to do that
I'd rather live with a broken heart
Than break anothers
I kno I'm about to cry
I see his picture and nearly die
I love him to death
But I'm not sure if he loves me
Sometimes I wonder what they'd do
With me out of thier lives
Will they care, or even notice?
As I lie there in my white oak bed
Will they cry out my name
And vow to never to forget me?
He'll take his ring back
And slip it on his finger
Maybe a tear will fall
But I would never know
Because my life would be over
But I would die in love.

~000820
~*~*~Tamma M. Offenstein~*~*~


If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.


© Copyright 2000 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Jenabou
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1 posted 2000-08-21 03:29 PM


well "Shall I ?" is the question
the answer is no
you shouldnt even be considering this. i know it hurts when yo ulove someone and you dont think the love is being returned. But everything happens for a reason,and if its meant to be with this guy it will be........but if not you'll fall in love all over again with another special guy that will love you back.
All you can do now is tlak to this guy about your feelings.........if they aren't returned you have to let time heal your heart, and let fate run its course.
Good luck to ya i know how painfull it can be
Good poem by the way too  
keep 'em coming
            
Love Ya Bunches
    ~Jen~


The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-08-21 06:31 PM


I really can't say anything that Jen hasn't already covered, but you should know we'd all miss you.  This is a great poem, thanks for sharing it!
Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
3 posted 2000-08-22 03:17 PM


I am sad to say that this will be my last poem posted, I will still continue to write, and I will come here to reply, but this is my last post for awhile. I've got to get my life figured out, and in order to do that, I must spend more time with Willie, my wonderful SO. Thank you all for your comments, and Goodbye

~*~*~Tamma~*~*~

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.


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