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Are We Together? |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I love you I hear that all the time I of course say it back I saw you with that other girl Are we together You say yes, but are unsure I of course say goodbye You walk up to me and say its not okay I was wrong I love you Are we together I fall for you again just to be with someone I thought you cared I was wrong So when you say together forever I say I love you and goodbye Cause in the end We aren't together Or are we?? "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
chel~~~are you questioning your relationship with a guy???you shouldnt do that...if you dont know if yous are even together why wait around to find out...find a guy that is gonna love you and not every other girl too... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
This is a good poem, very close to home for me. A girl I love dearly left me because she felt this way. She just didn't believe me when I said "I love you." That really hurt, but you've helped me see her view, even though I'm still upset that she didn't believe me, even though I meant every word of what I said to her. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey you guys, I am single and I really didn't think that you would see it as reality. I really didn't think too much of it while I was writing it. I am glad that you liked it though. Now that I am seeing this from different peoples POV's. I understand how everything makes sense. Thanks for the support. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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JR Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 22morris il |
very true poem. Too many times words are thrown around prematurly and it makes a bad situation always. I learned my lesson the hard way and hopefully people will read this poem and realize what really happens. great work! --JR "two roads diverged in a wood and I... I took the one less traveled by... ...And that has made all of the difference." --Robert Frost |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Great poem and I think you did a great job!! I really enjoyed this poem and hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is so true, sometimes we question our feelings. You've expressed the situation well. Thank you for posting it  [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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