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Look Back (reflect on life for a minute)
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Look Back (reflect on life for a minute) |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
ok i'm really bored tonight so i thought i'd share another poem. So here you go, enjoy. Look Back The stars come out to play we stand in night, the end of day walking along the ocean side talking about times gone by the moon shines off the water in your eye stareing in aw I break silence with a sigh and the wind blows through me, leaving a chill I think back and remember those days still and can't believe how we've changed so much I never thought that day would come I never thought i'd miss you this much but as the day grew short and nights were long I sat back in my chair but couldn't write your song ---Written by:Hoppy 5-23-00 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant "Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
hoppy this is so good!!!i mean i can actually picture it in my mind...2 thumbs up for you... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is wonderful hoppy.....I love the style, the simplicity, the meaning of it! Thanks for sharing it! Salooma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, this is great. It flowed well and I really liked reading it. Thanks for sharing it with us  |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I think this is a great and wounderful poem. I realy hope to read mor eof your work. Lovely_Kris |
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