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bobbi New Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 9USA |
love me hate me lie to me kick me in the face and kiss me better i can take it you can't hurt me you don't know how |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
Wow I feel a little hostility here....great expression....  |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Welcome and I think this is a great poem. Kepp up the great work and Hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Meladorri Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 14Indianapolis, IN |
So few words say so much sometimes.. I'm sorry if you're going through troubled times, but keep focused on the good things (there are some, they may be small, but they're there) and the light at the end of the tunnel will reappear. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very well said here, and Welcome to Passions! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Bobbi! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us and please keep in mind that we are very supportive of each other. The pleasure you receive from reading comments on your work is the same pleasure others need by receiving your comments on theirs. This is a rule that all poets here follow. We invite you to join the family! You've expressed yourself strongly in this first post, a lot of emotions in so few words! I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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