The Voice Of Her Eyes (inspired by Delirium & Karawynn Long)

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Teen Poetry #3

The Voice Of Her Eyes (inspired by Delirium & Karawynn Long)

Lurdburger
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 39
Carlisle, Cumbria, England

0 posted 2000-08-17 03:36 AM

Eyes of shimmering green
Pools of emerald
If I look too hard I may drown.

Eyes of brilliant blue
Reflect my optimism
And help me see the beauty of this world.

Eyes of deepest brown
Hiding the waters that run
Deeper than I could hope to go.

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

1 posted 2000-08-17 11:16 PM

This title is so so so perfect for this so so so incredible poem. Short, and cute. I liked it bunches, cant wait to read more! very deep, very brilliant!

love,
jeremydraul

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-08-18 01:55 AM

i love the way you put this poem...wow...i am speechless...the title may go perfect but the poem is perfect...good work...i like your style of writing!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

3 posted 2000-08-18 01:11 PM

this was wonderful....the title definatly grabbed my attention, and the words complete it! loved it!

salooma

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