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Perfection by Rick Miller
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Perfection by Rick Miller |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Burdens Heaviness on my soul Such is my life Hope A chance for peace Could it be her? Can she love me? Joy Friendship beyond belief Can we make it last? Excitement Fright A question looms as I meet her Please? Let me love you! Desire Comsuming my complete universe A dress A veil Worn to be removed by me An undeniable love at last Laughter My joy in her eyes Thus, my life goes on by Rick Miller |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow....i'm asuming he who wrote this would be lavada's husband?? beautiful....you'll raise a grand family of poets! I loved this: "A dress A veil Worn to be removed by me An undeniable love at last" Salma |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Yes, Salma, he is my husband. Thanks for replying!  stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Once again, put a mental picture of this sweet romantic moment, great job, your both wonderful at this, your meant for each other, im convinced! love, jeremydraul |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Cute, Jeremy...real cute  Thanks for the compliment! stay cool ~~Lavada~~  "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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