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Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

0 posted 2000-08-15 06:44 AM


Every moment with you i will never forget
Each new moment is better yet
The look in your eyes, the smile on your face
The love in your heart that no other could replace
You touch me lightly and run you fingers through my hair
I sit back and wonder what my life would be like without you there
Nights would be lonely, dark, and cold
Because you would no longer be there for me to hold
I would feel incomplete, like a part of me was missing
Instead of someone else, its your lips i would want to be kissing
Every night i would dream of your handsome face
And i would know that no one else could ever take your place
But i don't have to think about that because i have you
You have made every one of my wishes come true
You are my life, you are my world, you are my everything
To my life, happiness you bring
So every night i will thank God for you
And i hope you will keep making my wishes come true


~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

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Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-08-15 04:39 PM


What a lucky person you've written this for!  I really like the feeling of this poem, it's great.
GodsPerfktAngel
Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28
Ohio
2 posted 2000-08-16 11:48 AM


WOW! Thats all I can say! You nust have really deep feelings to be able to come up with this.I have been there and back.

         Sweet Poem!!  

Jocelyn M. Cosgray


~*you cannot hold back a laugh any more than you can a tide,both are forces of nature*~

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
3 posted 2000-08-16 11:50 AM


Great poem Lil Angel! Very nice feelings, and I agree..very lucky person you wrote it to!  

keep writing!

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart some

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