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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Stuckfast in Writer's Block, My feet cemented in the muck. Nothing much to say here. Nothing except "I'm stuck." Thousands of thoughts trying to be noticed, All chattering at once. Making what seems thoughtful on the inside, On the outside look like a dunce. My still form sits cold upon the chair, As silent as a tomb. The granite exerior smothers all ideas i have, Smothering them as they try to squeeze through. Many a thing i try to use, To wake my inspiration from the dead. But it seems that for now, its frozen. Cold, and stuck inside my head. It seems that this kind of thing happens, At every inspirational mile. And that's the time that i Just cut it for awhile. So for now, ill step away. Ill "pack it up, and pack it in", And return upon't* another day When inspiration's born again. (NOTE: upon't= upon it) [This message has been edited by !!! (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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MelissaL Junior Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 22Joshua Tree, CA, US |
Wow, that was pretty deep. I like your style and the concept of the poem.  ) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions!!! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us and please keep in mind that we are very supportive of each other. The pleasure you receive from reading comments on your work is the same pleasure others need by receiving your comments on theirs. This is a rule that all poets here follow. We invite you to join the family! I really enjoyed this first post! You've described the feeling of writer's block in a very tangible way that I'm sure many others have experienced (myself included). It's so nice to see that in this case, your writer's block inspired this treasure!  I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very nicely put, and welcome to passions and the teen forum!! I can't wait to read more of your poems  |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
welcome to passions!!! writers block or not, this is a great expression of what is going on with you right now. That makes it a great poem. Keep writing As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
I would like to thank you all for making me feel welcome, and responding to my work. your responses were a pleasure to read. Thanx again! -"!!!" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey, I totally have experienced your poem, many a time. I hate being stuck, it sucks! But I usually get over it. I loved your poem, it was personalized. Be cool! *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful! I too have often been in such a situation. It can be pretty awful, but writing about it is a great way to get rid of it! Welcome to Passions, we're glad to have you here! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Thank you once again LF, and Alwye, and everyone else who responded to my poem. |
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