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In the name of me |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa 
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Hey everyone, just so that you know, I think this is one of the most messed up poems I have ever written. I wrote it for a friend (I hope) and will give it to her on Monday... I told you what was on my mind, then, suddenly, you turned blind, blind with anger and hate towards me, what I did wrong, I fail to see, all I did was give you honesty. But I guess that is why I never did it before, look what it did... made you hate me much more. I will never do it again cause it made me loose you, friends that are precious, friends that are true, and even if you don't feel the same towards me, you'll always be friends in my mind that is free, free in this world of living poetry. I wish I could say I will be like before, I want to with all my heart, from te outside to the core, but sorrow has made a new home in my heart, he planted his seeds, anger and pain, not far apart. They have grown very strong and their roots are very deep, I can't get rid of them that is why I keep them locked up in side together with the tears I hide. What I ask from you now is to look at me again and to realize it's me and that I'm still you friend. What I ask from you now is to forgive me if you can for being my flawfull self, for being who I am. I can't expect you to understand, I can't expect you to see, that what I have written here is a part of me you will never understand, you will never be. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
This was awesome!! good luck monday ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem, you've put your thoughts into such great words here. I hope it goes well, it's always hard to lose a friend. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I hope all goes well for you on Monday.  I want you to realize that this person wasn't a true friend to have reacted this way to you. True friends never throw away a relationship over anger. All relationships are rocky and need to be worked at but you also need to be able to see the difference between true friends and false ones. Again, I hope everything works out for you. When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Thanks you guys, and thanks for those words of wisdom Marilyn, I will remember that Thanks again guys! Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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