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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
If I was to leave tomorrow Never to see you again Would you be upset? It's just that - I like to think that I mean something to you Because you mean the earth to me. I'm here when you want me And not when you don't And if you forget I'm here Then I'll disappear Until you think of me again. I'd like you to remember your sky Streaked with the beginnings of a cleansing And the way you watched it form, Through your window, with me by your side. And our last kiss - I'll always remember. And our last hug - I'll always remember. I love you dearly, sweetness. |
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lupigirl Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19Mequon, Wisconsin |
Beautiful sentiments, Lurd... I know exactly how you feel, believe it or not. I'm leaving for college and thus leaving the people I love the most VERY soon, and I often have the same sentiments. Thank you for sharing your feelings using the power of words!!  SMILE!! |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very tender and sentimental thoughts Lurdburger! Very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Awesome. I'd like to say more but the only word I can think of to adequately describe your poem is.........awesome. Peace out! *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Extremely sweet words, I enjoyed this! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Lurd, I'm dealing with a very similar thing right now so I can identify. I love the way you tell this person that you love them but you aren't going to force them to love you back. Beautiful sentiment!! Crystal |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Great poem- so sweet! Can't say that I can really relate all that well tho. Keep writing Bel |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
oooh this is sooo sweet!! very nice, she's a lucky gal... salooma |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
ahhh is lurd in love???haha good poem...this girl must mean alot to you and i wish you the best with her...keep up the good work!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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