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GodsPerfktAngel
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since 2000-08-05
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0 posted 2000-08-11 11:15 AM


You never saw the sadness I felt when you said were through
and I smirked as I said "We can still be good friends,forever me and you."
But my inside was torn out ever since you left
But I always agreed with you Beacuse you thought it would be best
Youll never see me hurt,youll never see me cry
You always see me smlie but inside I want to die.



© Copyright 2000 Jocelyn Marie - All Rights Reserved
SweetPoet17
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 108

1 posted 2000-08-11 03:52 PM


I feel this poem so much, I love your poetry it is simply incredible!
-jessica-

LoveBug
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2 posted 2000-08-11 05:55 PM


This is a good poem, but I'm locking this for now, because the author posted 6 poems in one day, which is WAY too much. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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