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From Now Until Forever |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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Even if you looked into the sky Counted the stars one by one, you'd Not come close, but barely begun To come close to the number Of forevers I want to share With you the one who's always there There to always make it okay There with all your special ways There through the day and into night There to make everything all right There to stand unyieldingly by my side Support me, no matter what I decide There to tell me that you love me To be the one who makes me me Who gives me strength to make it through It makes me wonder how I deserve you I am eternally thankful for all you've done From now until forever, you are the one. ~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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mickel2995 Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48 |
This is wonderful!! This is definatley a piece of work you should be proud of!! I love the title! Kepp on posting and keep up the good work! With love, Micale |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Mickel~ Thanks so much  . I am pretty proud of this one. Thanks again  .~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
I have to agree this is a well written and you should be very proud of this one. Keep it up. Jeanna "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I agree, this is beautifully written and you should be very proud of it, sounds like for sure it came from deep down inside your soul! Wonderful writing. I hope I will one day again feel the way you did when you wrote that poem!! Best of Luck and keep posting! Love Always~*~Jessica Lynn~*~ "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear angel: this is, indeed, touching... i hope that the one you've written this for will fulfill all of your hopes, dreams, and expectations for live, love, and happiness... the pink text and centering is a little distracting to me, but it was an overall enjoyable read... sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Jeanna~ Thanks so much . Glad you enjoyed.Jessica Lynn~ Thanks. I'm sure you will one day . Thanks again.Novacain For The Soul~ Thank you. I hope he does too . I'll keep that in mind about the color and centering. Thanks again.~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely beautiful Angel...finding someone to share forever with is an incredible thing..keep up the great work! *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Alwye~ Thanks so much . It really is an incredible thing. Thanks again .~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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Alpiner New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 9 |
Dear Angel, Sorry i couldn't respond sooner but with the problems with my computer i couldn't. Anyway this is one of your best works, it is so heart filled and beautiful. I feel the same way about you. Oh and once again sorry about Sunday it was my fault not yours at all. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is actually the first one i've read that's not negative. happy for ya i love the counting the stars part you did a great job...thanks for sharing your poem |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Alpiner~ Thanks Sweetheart. You're the best inspiration there is . And NO...it was MY fault. Love ya.acire~ Thanks so much . I love that part too. Thanks again.~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
I love this poem..beautifully written!! Keep writing I'll be looking forward to reading more of your poems!! Love ya, Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." "The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin "Follow your own heart, not others." |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Danielle~ Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it  ~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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Estrella New Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 8 |
I really liked this poem, especially the line ' It makes me wonder how I deserve you'. It really feels wonderful to be loved by someone who is too good to be true! Joleen |
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The Mastermind New Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 4 |
I have read a lot of poetry, and I have to say yours was one of the most meaningful ones, and written with extreme clarity. A best. I hope to read more in the future. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Joleen~ Thanks . Yea, he really is too good to be true, I love that feeling. Thanks again .The Mastermind~ That really means a lot to me and I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again .~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's an amazing thing to love someone this much. You describe it beautifully. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Lovebug~ Thanks so much . I'm glad you enjoyed it.~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Susie~ Sorry that this reply is a little late...But the saying goes better late then never right???LOL Anyways this was a really beautiful piece...I love the beginning...I havent seen any new work by you...But I do hope to see more!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was beatiful! It is soo sweet. Grea peom, keep writing! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is a great positive poem, I love the feeling behind it. Awesome writing! |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
ERIN, Thanks so much . It was a big surprise when I checked in and saw an old poem of mine on top. Nope, haven't written anything in awhile, real bad writer's block. Hopefully, I'll be returning soon.sweetstuff, Thank you too, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Lakewalker, Happy you liked it . I worked really hard on it.Thanks again everyone ~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey!! I haven't checkout the new poems in forever..but this was awesome! I like the part about the forevers...that was cute keep up the great work!!~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Angel~ Well .... hello there ! This was just lovely and I really LIKED what you did with the formatting. As you are slightly aware, I'm partial to the art of words. Keep it up ..... and WRITE MORE ! ! Love ya' gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
DQ, I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks .Marge, I'm really glad you liked it, I think this is the last thing I posted here that I really liked and right now on top of a case of writer's block I'm going to start work in 2 days (26hrs. a week) and am already participating in the German, Drama, Creative Writing, Key and Possibly Economics clubs at my school. On top of all of that I just got my Eleventh Grade Project back and I have to do a lot of work on that. All my time as far as writing goes right now is split between that and a prose piece that I have really been working hard on. Hopefully it will be done soon . Thanks again.~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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