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The Task-Master |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I breathe in.. Deep sniffs of satisfaction Taking delight In my creation I've hired a Task-Master To supervise.. Re-structure my thoughts The walls of denial.. Will be torn down Once my personal fortress of protection Now re-built with acceptance The roads leading to regret Newly paved.. With the wisdom of experience The mountain of uncertainties Disintegrated.. By explosives of self-confidence The Task-Master A professor of sorts Keeps school With my mind The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
The new, improved Deb1...This is fantastic. I love this analogy. And I do hope it is true....Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh deb this is great!! i sense hope in spite of a great weight. excellent work!! i loved the read!! thank you kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this, Deb, "The roads leading to regret" We know them all too well. Hope your taskmaster keeps things in line for you.  Luv ya. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Deb- Man, I got to get me a taskmaster of my own! I really loved this poem, you have such a creative mind! Keep em coming! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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