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An ode to pain & the enchantress of harm
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An ode to pain & the enchantress of harm |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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Purify me God, I do allow you Cleanse my impure body Exorcize my obsessed soul I'll burn everything that weares her mark And wait for the dark The preying darkness Like a reptile goddess She ate me whole She's the ruiner But I won't let her ruin me She spoke the sweetest words All lies, lies, lies It's all she knows She shaped me like clay Now I see gluttony brings decay She sent me down here again Twirling down the downward spiral To this familiar world of pain I'm the ash from the burning The wind will blow me away Erase my trail We were just a blaze Though she's still burning bright She enticed me with her beauty and charm Then cheated on me, enchantress of harm I hate you! I wish you were dead I hate you! My precious whore I hate you! My love |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Bitter,beautiful,lot of power in these words. also alot of truth! Click |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Now this is really dark, Broken. Feeling a little anger, were we? I like it, I really do. Nice work. Hardrock |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'll just quietly say I understand. We are not all like 'her' though!  |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Ohhhh the bitterness, well expressed! I like this one!!! It does dissipate over time though... The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! (What more can be said?) I love it! This is my kind of poetry! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Click~ You understand, thank you  Hardrock~ Anger? Yeah you can say that. When you find out that the one you're in love with has been ****ing around, you don't feel happy exactly. Glad you liked it Poet deVine~ I'm not quite sure you really understand, but thank you for trying.  Deborah1~ I hope you're right, about time... Thank you for your time and understanding Wren~ Wow! Thank you thank you thank you!! |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
wonderful...you've managed to sum up the confusing feelings that go with giving your heart to another and having it torn to shreds. agian, wonderful. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I'm so sorry I'm late but I haven't been here in a while. I love this piece very much Broken. You voice your words well...plenty of emotion beaming out at us...the anger, the pain, and all those *lovely* things that come along with it. I realize that you're down but please don't let it pick at you for long...you'll find better because you deserve better.  Take care my friend...Love, Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow what imagery you possess in your work. this is excellent. the street can go both ways, men cheat too, my friend. i can totally relate to the anger and pain you are feeling. heck of a way to express!! what a poem!!! felt every word. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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