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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Bring out the hounds to began the hunt, Chase them towards hell, Hounds can smell the air full of fear, Wails of souls running in front, Dark maze created from human flesh, Human waste drips atop the walls, Hounds are getting near, Jumping in the pool of lucid blood, Foam of fear rising over providing the souls with a cover up, Hounds howl in agony, For they fail to complete their task, Devil takes their souls in exchange For the ones they did not fetch back. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
What a fiendish vision! What hellish images! Truly astounding! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Xeo...you and a-alibaster are indeed two from the dark side. If I didn't know better, I would think you were one and the same. Great stuff here...I like it. Hardrock |
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glidingdove Junior Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 13 |
'Orrible Himages!! What about something from the light next? |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I am trying to work on a poem which shows the good of our worlds and everything around us, but the dark side has been clamped down. LOL. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
this one reminds me of anne rice.. anyway, this is great writing. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Gosh,...how dark. How very deliciously dark. It's full of it...and I like. hehe. Be well X. *Peace. |
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