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Xeonox
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since 2000-04-01
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0 posted 2000-07-21 01:24 AM


I live for all,

I die for most,

I suffer for rest,

I write for few,

I end for thee.




Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
sash
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

1 posted 2000-07-21 01:30 AM


So short , but covers a world of emotion. Well written. well said
Thanks!

Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-07-21 02:51 AM


Hmmm now this one made me think some.  ( no I am not mentally challenged...lol)
Nice thoughts here  

Peace
DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

3 posted 2000-07-21 09:00 AM


So much said...so much to ponder...so indepth...I LOVE IT!!

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-07-21 10:13 AM


X...this is really good.  Your forte' may be the short game.  I agree with all those above.  Hardrock
kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
5 posted 2000-07-21 02:39 PM


oh wow nox this is so powerful.  you know me, i love the short but sweet ones!!! most said, less read.  excellent.  

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
6 posted 2000-07-21 04:04 PM


I have not been able to accomplish a short version which will speak alot to the reader..Excellent job!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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