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Jaysun C
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0 posted 2000-07-21 12:42 PM


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Xeonox
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1 posted 2000-07-21 01:54 AM


Great torture...you have used such words that are hard to come by. Each line piercies my heart...Great job!!!!!!!!

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Jaysun C
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2 posted 2000-07-21 02:18 AM


Xeonox- thank you thank you
as my life will shurly burn there will be more no doubt

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3 posted 2000-07-21 02:28 AM


No need to thank me for your heavenly work.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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4 posted 2000-07-21 02:34 AM


Hey, this is fantastic!    Gripped me right to the very end!  And what an ending... excellent!  
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5 posted 2000-07-21 02:40 AM


Taramw- thank you
i must go find yor words now

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