navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #2 » And we write.............
Dark Poetry #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic And we write............. Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-07-20 11:50 AM


We all write of love
We all write of pain
But why do we write?
And what do we gain?

Some write about supermarkets
Others write of love found
Ohhhhhhhh then the heartbreak of love
Then they disappear with no sound

I remember the "trekky" poem
That made us all laugh and smile
Then there was the sad poems
That made me cry for awhile

Though even through the hard times
We all sit here and write
Wiping away our own tears
While bringing others some light

Together we stay bonded
Friends till the end
Holding each other tight
Flying full force into the wind

So if ever you feel sad
Just pick a name and say.....
"Hey I need to talk!"
And we'll help in any way

Because no one is perfect
And we all feel your tears
Just try to help me too
When I write of all my fears
< !signature-->

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light



[This message has been edited by Dark_kisses_Within (edited 07-20-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Mags - All Rights Reserved
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-20 12:01 PM


Oh, DkW...I'm going to needle-point that and put it on the wall of the boarding house I built.  That is such a truism!!  And we WILL be here when you write of your fears.  This is the cheapest therapy around.  So well said, my mantra.  Hardrock
a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

2 posted 2000-07-20 12:10 PM


Dearest DKW,
this is lovely and so heartfelt. Know that I may be the silent one, but if you should ever need some one to simpley listen/be there/and not judge in any way...I am here, just an e-mail away.
Hardrock is the only that really knows any thing about me...but that is alright, I still have good ears even if my mouth does not work so well!!


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Magebeast
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60

3 posted 2000-07-20 12:12 PM


And my highest praise: WOW.  It's been said already in replies to my first poem, but its really something else to see it in verse.  Awesome
Xeonox
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
CA, USA
4 posted 2000-07-20 12:49 PM


I wonder why you have do not have so many post for such a great poem. But you got my vote.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-07-20 06:21 PM


Love it, just the way we all feel I think, and stated just perfectly. I would be lost without this place and everyone here now. You write great poems. And I know you are having some pain right now, and please email if you ever want to talk.
Sandra/Cat


"Keep dreams alive, for if dreams die,
life is a broken winged bird
that cannot fly."

author unknown

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-07-21 09:18 AM


~OH DkW,...this is the best! I agree with Hardrock on putting it on the wall of the boarding house, (and would love to catch him doing that needle point thingy)hehe. This is such truth here and I just wanted to say thanks for writing it. It's awesome in every sense of the word. Be well D. *Peace.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #2 » And we write.............

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary