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Dedreia
Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

0 posted 2000-07-17 01:17 AM


Not my best I don't believe, but worth a look.

Serenade of Love...

The times I spend with you are the best of times.
Sitting beside you with your arms holding me tightly against you.
The look on your face proves to me that you love me.
The way you touch me tells me how much you care.
You make me feel so beautiful.
You have helped me become all that I am and all that I stand for.
For these things, I thank you
and
I will be forever...
Loving You.




© Copyright 2000 Dedreia Savoy - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-07-17 02:20 AM


Awwwwwww very romantic poem.    It makes ya just wanna go find a man to feel that kind of love! (NOT)  Just kidding here!   Love is so special, especially when someone can actually show it.  Great poem!!  

Peace
DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-17 11:33 AM


Very nice Dee, I hope you read it to him.
Sandra



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-07-18 05:07 PM


Nice poem,Dee.  Hope your "someone special" appreciates it...and appreciates you too.  Hardrock
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