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glidingdove
Junior Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 13


0 posted 2000-07-16 11:42 AM


Dear Nobody,

Here are some ramblings of a loving soul
The love that was born
Never to see the light of the day,
The song that was never sung
To create a symphony with nature
The flower that bloomed in the wilderness
Was like the Prayer offered to the Gods
Who could neither see, nor hear, nor feel
Was the love inadequate?
Or were the Gods not Gods?
The radiance of love that dwelt within the heart,
Serene in its purity
Tranquil in its depth
Did embrace the universe with its warmth.
But unmoved remained the soul of the Beloved!
Is the saga of love that was born,
Never to be seen, or sung?

Abha Menon



© Copyright 2000 glidingdove - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-07-16 11:45 AM


Welcome to Dark Passions!     Great first post also.  Keep up the work

Peace
DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

2 posted 2000-07-16 12:13 PM


Welcome to Passions, you and your wonderful words.
Awaiting more...


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

glidingdove
Junior Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 13

3 posted 2000-07-17 07:40 AM


Thanks


[This message has been edited by glidingdove (edited 07-17-2000).]

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-07-17 11:09 AM


this is divine!!  what great questions.  they also have ran thru my mind. welcome to dark!!!  looking forward to reading more of you!!  

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 2000-07-17 12:32 PM


Hmmm...it's got me wondering!!! Liked it!!
Bridgette  
Welcome to Passions!!!


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
6 posted 2000-07-17 12:46 PM


What a beautiful poem! Unrequited love is a wasted jewel indeed!
BTW, Abha is a lovely name, is it Indian? What does it mean?


Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


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