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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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As time transcends The crevice In my mind Utter desiccation. Darkness once again Returns And dejected I succumb. ~ Tara ~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Tara, are you having a week like mine? This is very sad. Hope all is ok. Nicely put. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Tara, what an intense poem! Teetering on the brink of the abyss. Not like your usual ones at all. Like cat, i hope you are ok!!!!!  Great piece, BTW. Right up my street! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Ouch! "I succumb" What horrible defeat! To stand at the brink of sadness and despair only to loose all composure and self control- to succumb....What a powerful word! (what a powerful poem for that matter!) Great job! I loved it! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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