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Dark Poetry #2

Please Dance With Me

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

0 posted 2000-07-11 06:38 PM

A soft melody
Tones of our love
Wear your soft slippers
Angels sing from above

Silver Bells...
Like tinkling of a glass
I float towards their ringing
Together at last

You waited in Heaven
Promoting the time
You summoned with strength
Again..you'll be mine

Please dance with me
Darling...
Sweet words of delight
Echoes a singer
That prepares me for flight

Celestial wonders..
A lifetime partner would know
Dance with me
Eternally
As the rays of light
From within you glow

Nostalgia is like a grammar lesson...You find the present tense..and the past perfect
"Anonymous"

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-07-11 08:13 PM

I really like this one Deb, sweet, and what a nice thought, that you could dance eternally with your lover..

"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 2000-07-11 08:21 PM

A truly beautiful and inspiring poem. *sighs* Ah, to love like this...I miss the days we danced...but hey, never loose faith in love.

Sorry I got lost in my mind again. Lovin' it Deb...superb!

Angel

I wish you could hear
the child that cries
in my flesh and makes
my bones ache
-Jewel

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 2000-07-11 09:30 PM

Deb...such nice thoughts...to be able to dance throughout eternity. Hope you dance forever. Hardrock

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