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Desperate Kind of Love
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Desperate Kind of Love |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
No one to whisper back to her, the things she whispered there. No one to lie beside her, no one her pain to share. No one to hold her hand, no one her tears to wipe. She is the vibrant, funny one she is the outgoing type. She leads a lonely kind of life, hating those above, she leads a lonely kind of life, a desperate kind of love. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
What an interesting life she lives. Nice poem. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh I felt this as a very lonely feeling. Trying to put on the happy face for the world, but no one knows the real you, so you are alone. Nicely put. Cat... "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
An excellent poem! This is the kind of thing I like to write about, too. Very well done. I wish it was entered for the book! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
How perfectly you described my life! I felt as if you were talking about me. Looking forward to more. Dee |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Nice one CDs...feelings many of us know well. Thanks....Hardrock |
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