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Bandit of Love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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He came to me quite suddenly on a cold and lonely day. He brought me warmth, he brought me hope, he stole my heart away. No reason to suspect it, things ended long ago, I never would have dreamt it but he made me love him so. He came and stole my logic, he turned it inside out. He made me want and need him with fervor, without doubt. He took my heart and held it in a kind and gentle way. The only probem rampant is he's not allowed to stay. He stole my good intentions replaced them with desire. I never planned to be here in emotional quagmire. He took away my heartache although it's coming back. He gave me hope, he gave me bliss, but now I'm on the rack. He stole my peace of mind, now I'm tortured in the night. I fight the urge to run to him, an unexpected plight. Beloved thief, I ask you, will you ever be with me? Or will you hand me back my heart because you can't break free? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm speechless. Kathleen |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This poem is simply superb!  Very good indeed. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I love how you compared a lover to a theif! it's perfect! |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Great, simply great!! More of the same, please. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Wow. So well written. But so much pain. I've felt that kind of pain in a very similar situation - I don't think I've hurt more in my life than then. I really feel for you if you're going through that. I know it's a terrible cliché but time does heal it eventually though the present be like hell itself. allan |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just wanted to say thanks to all, and Allan, yes it is hell, and I appreciate your understanding |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Simply wonderfully creative,and oh how love can rob us!! You out did yourself girl, Loved it!!!! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
like the way you compared a thief to a lover...sorry for the pain you are going through...it must be hard to still be in love with someone(beloved thief) when he has disappointed you so |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Superb! Very well done! Suffering has that one good side: it makes us creative. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Love the title,...and the poem itself ofcourse. A thief,...ha, that's a good one. So sorry though if you are hurting. Oh yeah,...quagmire,...cool word. I'm not sure that I've ever heard that before,...I looked it up...haha. Can you tell how much attention I pay in my classes. haha. Take care you. *Peace. |
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