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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
I'm with You every day, yet am treated like a stranger. Those callous words and acts leave My heart in constant danger. I know there was a time when Your love seemed real to Me. Do we mend or should we part, and end this travesty? ~Sash~ |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
It's true that sometimes we have to let go of the ones we love. For another poem that is somewhat related to this topic, check out the first one that I posted. Its titled "Lost Heart".  -the little one |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Short and sweet. Well written. jwesley |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
the words broke my heart. they were so painfully true. Kathleen |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Ive had to make those heart-wrenching decisions, and sometimes I ended up saying if this is the best thing for me then why doesn't it feel good? Sometimes I did what I thought was right and let the emotions catch up later. A very nice poem, hope though that everything works out for you! This I understood whole-heartedly |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very well put, and so true for so many of us. Good luck Catalinamoon |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Painful words to speak for sure. God Bless those who who both speak and hear them. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Thanks to everyone...I felt I needed an outlet to help Me through some tough times. A friend, You know as Click, told Me about this "family"...I will be forever greatful to Him, and all of You for the Love and support...ou are all Awesome!!!!...Thanks!!! ~Sash~ |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Wow!! I hear ya and I know how it is... Good poem!! Thanx!! peace to your heart, my friend. Keep writing!! Click |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sash....I'm sure this poem speaks to many. Nice work....Hardrock |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
I have just been reading several of your works. You have an exquisite way of expressing your pain. I certainly hope that your writing and sharing with us will help to purge it. I know it helps me with mine. Welcome. Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
sash, not much more I can add after everything has been said! This is another excellent poem, short and to the point. How I like them. Thanks to Click for bringing you here  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ditto to everything that's been said. So glad you post here. Be well Kethry "There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon |
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