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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-07-04 01:09 AM




Ok, so I am a little out of it this week. LOL. Just insert anywhere into the other poem..

Good lord, I forgot the worst of all,
the day lovers delight.
The hearts, the flowers, all the love,
serves reminder of my plight.

St. Paddy's day, that ones ok,
no pressure to be loved.
Just down a cold green beer or two
and wallow in the fun.

Easter used to be alright
till my Grandpa died that day.
Now chocolate bunnies, and Jesus rising,
can't stop my need to cry.

Memorial day just makes me sad,
the sense of loss if great.
So many lives, so many loves
destroyed through greed and hate.

And if you live in Southern Cal
You'll add another one.
Cinco de Mayo, big fiesta,
but without a patner, you are done.

All these days have good and bad,
I'm not really a scrooge.
But those of us without true love
We are the ones who lose..

© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-07-04 01:22 AM


i'm so very sorry i was only trying to make you feel a little happier i'm sorry. see right now were alot little i have no love and were both in the same mood or state of mind. so if you ever need anything you can email me or call i'll give you the number if you want if you email me.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-04 07:42 AM


Sandra...two poems about holidays, and yet you never mention Valentines Day.  Hmmmm....  Love ya anyway....Hardrock
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-07-04 09:01 AM


To Jeremiah, not to worry, I am fine. Just realized how many I missed in the first one when you were teasing me.  Hardrock, the first one here is valentines day, what other hearts and flowers days are there? Unless theres one I don't know about, which would not surprise me..
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