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The PLOT !
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
THE PLOT! Once again my mind turns to thoughts of what The Grandmaster planned while deciding our lot And were we really players in the game? Or merely embellishments to the actual plot? And if we were part of what He planned Why could we not reach out for His hand? Why have we to wait for the waves to cast us out Like pebbles upon the sea shores sand? And what is that invisible line lying between The happiness and sorrow all men have seen? And is not the one the friend of the other? Does not one, the prelude to the other mean? |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Excellent, Deepak, just excellent!!! I do appreciate your poetry. Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love? |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
The ageless question asking why, Asked from anothers eyes. The truth I know will always hide from the conscious we abide. Wonderful piece.  Enjoying each and every one. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yes, what excellent questions. Questions that have gnawed at man's soul for centuries. A great piece of work! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Well put,...this here pondering poem. Enjoyed it and it's deep thought provoking questions...one's I of course have asked myself at times. Great work here. Take care. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
wonderful poem and the question you ask is so true i love it so much. i wrote a song about the same thing though its kind of different it makes the same point. enjoyed the read and keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes the great tapestery in life, it's to bad we'er on the side with the knots. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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