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Bad Day |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Today is a rough one, I could use some help. It's a day of intimacy between two, and I'm not one of them. Oh how I wish I was. It's an important day, that I have no part of. I knew it was coming. I tried to be calm. I hid from the pain but it found me anyway.. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ouch! This one so obviously hurts! Hurt me. A touching poem. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well first off its a great piece and i rather enjoyed it. but i must tell you that i'm here for you if you ever need to talk and i hope things work out for you real soon. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
So many times I have tried to prepare myself for that hard time that I know I will face, and am still surprised when the emotions catch up with me and take over, Im here If you need me!! |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
What you're talking about here is no fun, that's for sure, and you express it so well. Reminds me of my mother. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Very Lovely - even though very sad Deepak Menon |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes kid we do have the same path love, light. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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