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Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire

0 posted 2000-06-29 07:32 PM




He will express his intentions
With more than words
He will be fine tuned
His senses sharpened

He will shower me with
Moments of kindness
He will plant a flower
On my heart

He will touch me
With temptation
Recieving me as I am the only one
In his existance

He will awaken my spirit with
tenderness
I feel his sweet caress
He will dance with me
slowly
To a verse of his own

He will write a love story
With a never ending theme
Creating a world of wonder
Gently pulling me in

Only he can leave me..
Wanting more







  

© Copyright 2000 Deborah Murphy - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-06-29 08:07 PM


This is very good..I really enjoyed it.  
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-06-29 11:47 PM


He sounds like the perfect man, where did you say I find him?
Nice flow and feeling too.

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-06-30 02:03 AM


great piece. enjoyed the read thanks for posting it.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
4 posted 2000-06-30 03:24 PM


You write such excellent poetry Deborah. So easy to read and take the meaning into the soul. Superb. Allan


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