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The Tear |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas 
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Last night A tear fell heedlessly Upon my hand... A strange, clear drop Of grief. There, as a jewel it shone... And only I could know That in its depth Was held The reflection Of your face. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
this was short but very deep i luv it rex i can completly relate.you should have made this a book registry. its great< !signature--> Don't fear failure so much that you refuse to try new things. The saddest summary of a life contains three descriptions: could have, might have, and should have. --Louis Boone [This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i would have voted for it also. enjoyed the read so very much. and i see a type of play going on but i might be off key. i see something like an angel cring and its that person tear. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I agree with the others. Beautiful and sad ... Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Excellent Rex....(Note to all: Rex has his poems published in a book....e-mail him and he will give you the particulars on how to obtain a copy) Hardrock |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
How do you know these things Rex? Always does the tear contain deep within those reflections... Masterly writing! Deepak |
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