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FJiznit Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24 |
I came across this whilst looking for something else. The judge and the jury Had to put me away Safe with the madness Running loose in my brain I'm here now for good No release for this soul Life means life No hope of parole No bars or walls In this prison of mine No locked doors It's all in my mind In my solitary confinement I'm kept free from pain Away from society Safe but insane I'm my own prisoner While I'm doing my time And time ain't forever When living's your crime |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Cool Poem, i like the part about being insane. Great metaphors. Dude, dont worry...i am insane too...its kinda fun! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I tried sanity once...it didn't work for me. Good work, FJ. Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
WOW!!! Been there, done that and now I work in one!!! lol  Oh my dear sweet friend.... life can get better. And breaking out is ... well..... only in time. That "Time" word gets on my nerves some, but yet I know its true.Luv ya and excellent work!!! Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i also have been here and i'm still doing it. my mind does not belong in this time. well anyway enjoyed the read and hope to see more. and i had to print this cause your descibeing both of us. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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