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LarBear
Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York

0 posted 2000-06-28 08:18 AM


All alone, nothing to do,
It is lonely here without you.
The candle light is burning low,
Love songs on the radio.

Promises, it all fell through,
Now everything is in black and blue.
The colors faded with the night,
The star we used to wish upon
Some how lost the light.

Thoughts of you filled my mind,
Loving you was also kind.
As I lay awake tonight,
In my heart, I'll miss the arms
That held me tight.

But in the end words can be deceiving,
And now only seeing is believing
The dream of us together
Looking into each others eyes
Knowing the pain that may last forever
The hurt that makes tears slowly cry

Could we love one another?
In secret or in thought
If in thought, I love you and no other
If in secret, I will love you like no other.
All Alone and nothing to do,
These are the thoughts I have of you.


© Copyright 2000 LarBear - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-06-28 11:07 AM


Awwwwwww now this was beautiful.  So many times I have loved someone in thought only.  Its not the best way to do things, yet its better than nothing.  Very nice poem!!

Peace


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
2 posted 2000-06-28 11:18 AM


yes, what a lovely poem. Brought tears to my eyes!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-06-29 12:10 PM


yes truely a lovely poem. great expression so please do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
4 posted 2000-06-29 02:09 AM


this is soooooo beautiful!!!!!  it reminds me of a guy i wish i could forget... keep up the great work!! agian, SOOO BEAUTIFUL!!!

-if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger.-

LarBear
Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York
5 posted 2000-06-29 11:36 AM


Thanks for the comments.

Its nice to know that my words mean differant things to differant people.
I guess that what poetry is all about.

Love keeps the world smiling.

LarBear

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-06-29 08:09 PM


~LarBear,...aww, this is wonderfully expressed.  Such a longing in this.  Great work. Do take care. *Peace.
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