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Holly
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 127
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-06-27 10:16 PM


My Plea

oh please lift me from my body here
let me go so i can give up this deep fear
never felt like i truly fit into this place
feeling like i was trying to win a race

can't you just take this all away now
please here, now, somewhere, somehow..
i want to hear the angels sing
i long to hear those sweet bells ring

you memory burdens my every breath
life without you is worse than certain death
how did this happen to me and you?
i'm so lost by myself and i don't know what to do

please i beg of you--
oh please lift me from this planets face
please take me to your perfect place....
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I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.  
  Michel de Montaigne



[This message has been edited by Holly (edited 06-27-2000).]

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Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-06-27 10:34 PM


Holly,
A very touching tale.
Thank God for unanswered pray is fitting here I think.
jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-06-27 11:32 PM


Felt the pain in this one hon.  I hope you find that sought after happiness again soon.
Happiness has a snowballing affect, it starts small with a brief small, and grows and grows...
But the first step is the letting go of the pain, and as time goes on it will be easier to do..
*hugs*  and great work  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-06-28 12:12 PM


I too have begged for this topic    And not too long ago.... I tried to do something about it.  Thank goodness I failed at it.  ( i am so bad at accomplishing things   )   Life does get easier.  Always remember ... even tho you take one step forward and two steps back, you are still moving!  Take it a day at a time, dont rush into anything you cant handle.  Good luck my Friend!

Peace


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-06-28 01:06 AM


I used to take one step forward and two steps back....and it bothered me greatly....until one day I realized: I'M DANCING!!!  You will dance again too, my child.   Hardrock
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
5 posted 2000-06-28 02:00 AM


i have felt this also i lost my true love to a gang fight and things have never been the same way but i'm surviveing and i hope you do to.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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