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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
I've exhausted every possible solution I've tried every game there is to play. In this search for my own perfection, I'm convinced I've only left myself ashamed. Hey, you- in the mirror- staring back at me... oh, concience, let me be. Yeah, I wonder if you can hear my despair. Afraid to live my life: afraid he doesn't care. And if he answers and I fall again, Can I still be his daughter? Can I still depend on him? My convictions seem to fade with desperation. My hope declines with each and every tear. My sin an anchor and his face just an illusion, the goblet is heavy and justice is near. The light comes on, I find stains on my hands I put my pride aside, I know he won't understand because it's deeper than deep and it's wider than wide why did I ever doubt? Now I'm dying inside. They really are wrong when they say I am strong as the darkness covers me. *Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.* |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
wow!!welcome to passions. it had power and depth to it. Regina |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
this is a great first post. there were some really interesting ideas in it. welcome! jann elizabeth |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions. And what a GREAT first post. Hope you enjoy your stay!  Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful first post, welcome... and huggzz ~Wynter< !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-27-2000).] |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
We all have questions we cannot answer. I think that this poem had asked some of the questions that we refuse to admit to ourselves. Welcome to Passions. "My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, and dies in violence." --ALG |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
prevailing darkness, firstly welcome to passions. Secondly do not go gentle into that good night, rage rage... Dylan Thomas suits your style.You did this poem so well, full of passion and strength. write on, be strong. Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
WOW. Thank you all so very much!! I never in a million years thought I'd get such a positive response from one of my poems. You all have inspired me to really try to publish my book.... Thank you all so much! I definately feel welcomed here *Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
P D - glad to see you are already feeling welcome here! I agree...definitely a strong entry... please check your email... K[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to DP and passions. Strong emotions in a wonderful first piece. Bravo  *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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