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SwEeTnSeXy18
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0 posted 2000-12-21 03:33 PM


"My Angel"

You're off in some far away place
I see a glimpse of your loving face


And the way your wings float so full of grace
You're my angel and noone can take your place


Sitting on a cloud your caring ways
And lovely face attract a crowd


You're hair gleams like spun gold against the sun
Your personality was truley fun


I love you so much my angel
So much I cannot express except to say
You were, are, and always will be the absolute best


My words are heart-felt my angel
And I also know that you've always been heaven sent

By: Lisa Kennedy
Dedicated to my mom (whom passed away when I was 12)


~in order to gain, you have to lose~


© Copyright 2000 Lisa Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-12-21 04:05 PM


Precious words for your angel mom...James
firecrakker
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since 2000-10-20
Posts 235
Virginia
2 posted 2000-12-21 09:00 PM


Lisa,
I'm sorry that you had to lose someone so special at such a young age.. but you have a very beautiful way of remembering her..

Sheila

bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
3 posted 2000-12-21 09:20 PM


Beautiful poem
Im truely sorry for your loss

SwEeTnSeXy18
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4 posted 2000-12-22 01:09 AM


Jmlee12345:

Thanks!

firecrakker:

Thanks for caring. She was beatiful!  

bluebrdy65:

Thanks! Look foward to reading some of your poetry. Take care.  

~Lisa~


~in order to gain, you have to lose~


carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
Posts 142

5 posted 2000-12-22 02:27 AM


I'd miss eachother too, find the best worst of all and let them know you might not.

a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
6 posted 2000-12-22 06:48 PM


I really know kinda what you feel like. I lost my friend about 8 yrs back (I'm 15), and I am still going through the stages.
--Lil' Girl
PS: Prayers to your mom.

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 247
nc
7 posted 2000-12-22 08:04 PM


carolinadreams:

Not sure what you mean by that reply but thanks anyways!  )

a_little_girl:

Thanks...im sorry about your friend. Take care.

~Lisa~


~in order to gain, you have to lose~


David Generous
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since 2000-12-15
Posts 13

8 posted 2000-12-23 07:09 PM



I like the poem, it painted a good picture in my Mind...  Sorry about your loss..
Dave

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
9 posted 2000-12-23 09:41 PM


I lost a friend (3 years on feb 3rd) and this poem reminds me of my own angel, thank you it was very good
SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 247
nc
10 posted 2000-12-23 10:04 PM


David Generous:

I like your Panhandle. Thanks, I appreciate it. Take care.

Ginners:

Im sorry about your friend. Thanks for caring. Take care.

~Lisa~


~in order to gain, you have to lose~


MysticWonders
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since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY
11 posted 2000-12-24 04:40 PM


This was beautiful poem you wrote..in your mother's memory*S*
Wishing you happy Holidays,
Danyel

baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
12 posted 2000-12-25 02:16 AM


I feel this even without the loss of my friend.  Moving away from my family and friends has created a fealing of such.  Maybe not to the extent but somewhat like it.  

God Bless you and prayers to your mother in heaven

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 247
nc
13 posted 2000-12-25 10:37 PM


MysticWonders:

Thanks! Merry Christmas to you also! Take care.  

baerlon:

Thanks. I'm sorry you had a rough move. I like your quote. Take care.

~Lisa~



~in order to gain, you have to lose~


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