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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Does the moon fulfill each wish with radiance? or does the sun burn sweet dreams into ashes? Do the winds carry thoughts to far away places? as the moon fills passion in our hearts Or does twilight peak as rapture consumes the air lusting until tomorrow night when darkness can be shared? A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Victoria... Do the winds carry thoughts to far away places? this is something I have often wondered myself...and what do they do if they go there? Enjoyed the read  K |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
cool poem! I like the ending a lot. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
More sweetly sensuous poetry from the master (mistress?) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much everyone..severn.. fractal and sandra..pleased you all enjoyed HUGS~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I like this one Victoria You are amazing! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
you are too kind insect..thanks for peeking in dark passions  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You know, I started out at Dark Passions and have just been so happy lately, I usually stay in open but I'm so glad I read this, I loved it! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Having been away for a while and comming back to see work such as this makes me realise I could never stay away for long. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Victoria, I love imagery that is associated with nature ... and u have done this so beautifully ... This was a wonderful read . ~verve |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
kathleen..im glad you came by today too ..and stop by my often..HUGS Eddie..i have missed you around here..always nice to hear from you.... verve..thank you so much..im pleased you enjoyed. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Victoria, I love the references to nature here, as well.. This was a beautiful read. Thank you. Sheila |
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PureM Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22London, UK |
Once in a while a poem hits you and takes you onto a different plain, gives things a new hue, shows us a divine slant. This is one of those poems... stunningly beautiful keep weaving your magic poet! going back to read it again!! Awe struck, Matt |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sheila and matt..im glad you both enjoyed..thank you for reading.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i REALLY enjoyed this one....fantastic. ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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